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 Seveneves by Neal Stephenson - A Book Review

Hardcore Scifi and Soft politics, this book is an enjoyable long haul. 


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  • Katie Pharoah
    This is great! Loving the premise so far, can't wait to see what happens next. The only CC I can offer is to give the chapter a name instead of New Chapter :)
    One Light
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    An invention of a crazy professor leads to a mind full of pictures and Lina might see something that will open her eyes to a brand new world. A new light shines in her path leading her to who she should...
  • Katie Pharoah
    Ooh, now this is wonderful. I adore the cover and your descriptions are just awesome. Can't wait to read more :)
    The Summer of Monsters
    The Summer of Mons...
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    Tane North has done terrible things. Three years ago, she killed her father in self defense and was found tramaitized and bloodied by a man known only as Sable. Now sixteen years old, Tane is a teenager...
  • Katie Pharoah
    1 months agoReply
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    This is written beautifully, your description flows so well. I can't wait to see how the story progresses :)
    Moonboy
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    This is a story about the son of the moon, and the middle daughter of a very minor star. It should be, at least. Spoilers: it isn't.
    Mirlotta
    1 months ago
    Ahhh, thank you so much! <3 <3
  • Katie Pharoah
    1 months agoReply
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    Ooh, this is interesting. I love the world-building so far and can't wait to find out more about this Shadow. Keep up the good work :)
    What The Shadow Takes
    What The Shadow...
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    I see it. It's darkness. It is cloudy darkness. An inky substance... A Shadow. Then I saw her. Emily. She was smiling and wearing a crown. It looked like it was made of light. She was a beacon of light...
    VioletSophieJuliette.
    Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
  • Katie Pharoah
    1 months agoReply
    This is interesting! I like the concept and how the robots are learning for themselves. Some CC, the summary could be rephrased to make more sense, but it's a small issue. Good work :)
    Assembly LIne
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    The Middle east in the very distant future, and the only sign of life is two robotic androids, what is their purpose?, and how and why have they been abandoned in an old factory?
    benx12
    1 months ago
    Thanks for your comments I appreciate it, I wrote it as a general comment on social norms and values , and how we generally don't question what we do , we just do it, like the phrase '' how are you ?'' is so common place but is just a turn of phrase, hope people will get that, if not maybe they will just like the story , it's all good.Cheers
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